Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
I enjoyed your writing today Dylan. It made me laugh about your dad being a bear....have you read this to him? Would he agree? Keep up the awesome home learning.
Hi Dylan. My Name is Brittany and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked looking at your "I am they are work." I think you added some good describing words about your family. It reminded me of when my family tickles and cuddles me. Maybe next time you could tell us a bit more on what you had to do for your work. Any way it was still a good blog post. Thank you for sharing your work with me. If you want to see some of my work go to my blog at wpsbrittanyp.blogspot.com. Blog you later.
Hello Dylan, My name is, Ros-Alan, I go to Waikowhai Primary,and I'm in Waitemata. I really like the way you matched your family with animals, it was quite funny I must say. Maybe next time you could explain a little bit more about it. Thanks for sharing your work. Bye!
I enjoyed your writing today Dylan. It made me laugh about your dad being a bear....have you read this to him? Would he agree?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the awesome home learning.
Hi Dylan.
ReplyDeleteMy Name is Brittany and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked looking at your "I am they are work." I think you added some good describing words about your family. It reminded me of when my family tickles and cuddles me. Maybe next time you could tell us a bit more on what you had to do for your work. Any way it was still a good blog post. Thank you for sharing your work with me. If you want to see some of my work go to my blog at wpsbrittanyp.blogspot.com.
Blog you later.
Hello Dylan,
ReplyDeleteMy name is, Ros-Alan, I go to Waikowhai Primary,and I'm in Waitemata. I really like the way you matched your family with animals, it was quite funny I must say. Maybe next time you could explain a little bit more about it. Thanks for sharing your work. Bye!