Piggy
“Oink!!!” Cried Piggy. Samantha thought it was just a normal pig, so she carried on and went to go upstairs but on the way she saw a huge enormous pig but it wasn't just standing on the ground but it was on two HOOVES! Samantha was shocked so she ran upstairs and unlocked the red door but piggy still followed, she thought that she was going to die, but in a quick flash she saw a peep hole in the wall so she went in it and fell downstairs. Then she saw that she still had to find the white key! Suddenly Piggy said “ I’m coming to kill you!!!”. She quickly moved fast and put the gears in place, the bucket with the white the key came up and she grabbed it and ran to the white door. She ran to the door and opened it, as well as escaping. She drove away to the police station but before she did Piggy put a tracking device under her car and followed ... To Be Continued
Talofa Lava Dylan! I am Angelina from Waikowhai Primary School. I really loved reading you blog! It reminded me of how we were doing free writing and I wrote about a giraffe! In a completely different environment though! Maybe next time you could introduce your blog and tell the readers why you are writing the story! Other than that I absoulutley loved you blog! It had twists and turns! I can't wait for the part two of the story! I will definitely comment on the next one!
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Blog you later Dylan!
Thank you Angelina for the commenting, and yes there will be a part two coming soon!
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