WALT: write a truly captivating holiday recount
For a few days we have been writing a deconstructive recount about our holidays and add the 5 senses, we had to make it descriptive and after a buddy had to guess what we did.
Reflection :
I found it easy to... find the image.
I didnt find anything hard.
Maybe next time I could... add more sentences.
Kia ora Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your descriptive holiday recount and the way you used the five senses to describe what you did in the holidays. Maybe next time you could work on proofreading and using paragraphs. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
hi Dylan,
ReplyDeletei love your descriptive writing it really caught my eye. in the holidays days i went to rainbows end. Maybe next time make it into paragraphs. blog you later!!! Alice
Kia Ora Dylan,
ReplyDeleteMy name is William and im from Glen Brae School i really liked your Recount
and how you used descriptive writing maybe next time you can use more paragraphs so you can explain more. William